WSOC 11:00 News, January 19th
News items were precise and to the point. They used descriptions and emphasis that drew your attention and covered basic points. Transitions between stories were smooth.
Actions Words: More details, robbed, punched, Today, Doctor did the Unthinkable, Frigid artic air, Major blow,
Passive Voice: On a few stories, especially when they broadcast the NC powerball. No enthusiasm.
Follow up at the end of most stories? Weather did follow-up, but most stories didn’t, they just seemed to just move right into the next story.
What differences in writing styles between tv and radio? Radio seemed more serious.
Did the writing engage you in the newscast? Why or why not? No, the lead-in story was the MLK make up day again. Tired of hearing about it. The next story was the Charlotte Meck. Budget issues. Tired of hearing about it. The usual shooting in Charlotte and again-the subway robbery. After these two long drawn out stories, the weather twice, and then the boring sports, there was very little time left for other news stories, especially after all the commercials. There were too many commercials. Thank goodness for DVR. I don’t like the way the sports talent broadcast the sports. She always has choppy sentences with too many pauses. They don’t flow smooth and it gets frustrating waiting on her to complete a sentence.
WBT – Internet, January 19, 2011
Used more descriptive language. Slower speech with more clarity. Use of music used more. Non-stop talking, not many pauses to prevent dead air time.
Action Words: Music creates emphasis. Dramatic station call letters.
Passive Voice: Stock Updates
Differences in tv and radio? Writing for radio has to be more creative to draw a picture for you with words whereas tv complements their broadcast with video clips.
Were you engaged in radio? Engaged? I don’t know. The stories were new items and not the repeated news stories you hear on tv over and over day after day. So, I guess the answer is yes, I tended to be more interested in their broadcast. Also commercials were very limited and radio personality seemed more interesting and serious. Tv personalities tend to try to make jokes too much.